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12/20/2008 01:13:12 PM |
| Well, to start, I'll say that your light is interesting. An interesting use of foreground bokeh as well. Your overall composition is a bit boring. There is really nothing there to catch attention. Perhaps if there were certain keys that were in the focal plane, it would be a bit better. It just seems uninspired. Your focus is a bit soft as well. When I see a photo, I search for a focal point where the subject can be studied. This leaves me a bit lost in the frame. Perhaps a higher DOF would have worked here to bring more of the bg into focus. Anyway, good luck in the challenge. :) |
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12/19/2008 06:39:14 PM |
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12/18/2008 04:30:33 PM |
| I'm sorry i really couldn't understand what did you try to do there. I don't see any aspect off bokeh and almost everything is out of focus. Try to use your idea in different ways next time! Keep trying! |
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12/18/2008 10:13:29 AM |
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12/17/2008 02:55:20 PM |
| I like your perspective but you have not achieved bokeh. Great for a perspective challenge. |
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