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05/30/2004 01:19:06 PM |
That's much better mate!
Sorry for the harsh comment before, I'm glad it helped though :)
Now it looks way better..Though now the opposites are less obvious.
Keep trying, you're getting better :) |
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05/19/2004 11:59:03 AM |
I reprocessed this photo after all of the very helpful comments. Thank everyone who took the time to comment.
Message edited by author 2004-05-20 02:14:08. |
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05/17/2004 12:29:35 AM |
| Wonderful idea - the concept of black and white comes across beautifully. The composition and position of the birds within the frame is a little haphazard, and I'm not quite able to follow the lines as well as possible. I think a closer crop with only the right five birds with allowing the diagonal line of the ground to lead the eye might work a bit better. |
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05/16/2004 05:59:53 AM |
| Not enough detail in the birds Harsh lighting. |
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05/15/2004 11:20:31 PM |
Your image has a nice overall feeling - and it's a nice idea for opposites. Composition wise - the upper left corner should be removed. Post processing - the contrast seems a bit high.
Still a good opposite entry. |
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05/15/2004 01:43:09 PM |
| Interesting - it seems like the birds have been "punched-out" of the image to reveal a black background. Black vs. white. Organic vs. inorganic. Smooth/flat texture (birds) vs. grainy texture (texture). Overall, I think all of your visual cues are working together to support the "opposite" concept. |
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05/15/2004 06:35:05 AM |
Nasty birds eh?
Could be focused more |
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05/14/2004 04:23:12 PM |
| The rocks are overexposed - looses the detail and texture. The birds are underexposed, also loosing detail. It's a nice composition otherwise. |
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05/13/2004 03:36:20 PM |
| Very very difficult subject against those light rocks...The whole photographs feels overexposed and the birds suffer from lack of detail. |
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05/13/2004 12:34:42 PM |
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05/12/2004 07:34:10 PM |
| Improvements that I would like to see...UV lens. This is way too bright/fried from the bright sunshine. Needs some more contrast. Also I think a tighter crop since it's just rocks repeated. Best of luck in the challenge. |
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05/12/2004 06:16:11 AM |
| I like the photo... a little to busy for me though. |
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