| Author | Thread |
|
|
12/26/2008 02:26:18 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 5 or 6.
You're bokeh is a lot more subtle than most of the entries I have seen, but the photo works well as a whole. I like the layering of the horizon and the aerial perspective created by all the fog. I realize you were trying to highlight the rim lighting, but I find the foreground a little dark overall. This may be a personal taste however. In the end, it is a nice photograph and just a little too subtle for the fast voter to appreciate.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
12/22/2008 10:36:17 AM |
| There could be a closer look at those leafs! The background is too sharpened and i don't see any creamy aspects at the fore or background...like i said, try a closer look at those leafs, and the lens wide open, more speed...i'm sure you will get a good bokeh with that mountains and sunlight, which are great! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 11:13:08 PM |
| Beautiful outlining of the leaves. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 06:57:45 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 04:36:06 PM |
| the backlight to highlight the edges of the plant - the layers of hills behind - really good vision to find this |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 11:38:11 AM |
| this is beautiful. the rim lighting on that plant is perfect. nice work! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 08:05:45 AM |
| I like this. Your bukeh adds to the value of the picture - unlike most of the other photos in this competition. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/19/2008 03:12:29 AM |
| better lighting on the subject would help for me pretty close |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
12/17/2008 03:09:06 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/03/2025 06:51:10 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
