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01/07/2009 08:16:54 PM |
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:
composition: The framing of the little boy by the two people on either side create a nice border around him. The straight gaze he's giving also helps with the center composition.
color: i like the over saturated colors, but for some it may be too much. The little splashes of different colors throughout the frame really help lead the eye around to view everything captured.
contrast: contrast is nice, and just enough to set the boy out from the crowd.
focus: i can clearly tell the focus was on the boy, but on his back side, there is some strange movement going on.
depth of field: very nice, enough to dissect the boy from the surroundings, but just enough to make it out and adds to the overall image.
lighting: the harsh lighting for me adds emphasis and the more feeling to the image.
other:overall, i feel this image was a great addition to the challenge. But when most think of Asia, they think of the "oriental-prototype", but you scored very well. I hope to see more of your work in future challenges, keep up the hard work!
-Kari Ann |
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01/06/2009 10:22:30 PM |
Great photo journalistic style! Nice colors, and a good catch. |
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01/02/2009 08:01:30 PM |
Love the colors. Evokes nice emotion. I give this a 9. |
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01/02/2009 07:16:38 PM |
i like the movement all around him and the coloring is great for this image! |
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01/02/2009 06:48:07 PM |
I like the overall composition, but the yellow cast is too strong for my taste. |
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01/02/2009 03:55:12 PM |
This is wicked hard on the eyes. It works better on Symbiosis where there's less light. Good Luck. |
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01/01/2009 10:16:08 PM |
I like the yellow tones in this. |
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12/31/2008 09:54:21 PM |
this is interesting...at first I see to much yellow...think it might look better in B&W then I look at the colors and it draws me in...nice shot |
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12/31/2008 05:25:13 PM |
Really nice composition but the colour looks a bit yellow 6 |
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12/31/2008 02:30:35 PM |
There is some odd haloing around some parts of the image, (the mans arm in the background, and the top of the boys head) and the saturation is WAYY strong but I find it to be interesting street photography in spite of those things. |
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12/31/2008 01:25:37 PM |
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12/31/2008 03:50:46 AM |
Good shot. But I feel the yellowish tinge in the photo is a bit too much especially on the gunny sacks |
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12/31/2008 01:12:14 AM |
Great candid. Great colors. |
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12/31/2008 12:57:16 AM |
Nice capture. Like the isolation of the subject. |
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12/31/2008 12:48:17 AM |
Hm, looks like a photojournalist piece. Good work, though the grain is really odd--some areas look almost double-exposed, especially on the boy's pants/left arm. |
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12/30/2008 02:32:05 AM |
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12/30/2008 12:21:55 AM |
I find the boldness of the color so enjoyable, among many other things like the confrontation between the young subject, and we, the viewer...very nice. |
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12/29/2008 07:00:30 PM |
I don't know if the colours works here. perhaps there is too much yellow but I am sure that is your choice. the image is strong, and probably with other choice of palette could be better.... but I like this image.7 |
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12/29/2008 01:31:10 PM |
This could have been a great entry for me, but I dont like the processing or the side borders. |
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12/29/2008 10:46:34 AM |
The picture feels a little over processed. Wonderful capture of an Asian scene. Wonder what it would have looked like in B&W. 7 |
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12/29/2008 08:20:25 AM |
I like the harsh rich colors. |
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12/29/2008 04:00:37 AM |
Nice. Any good cook will recognize the presence of these spices; sarson and zaafraan and lal mirchi. |
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