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05/16/2004 06:56:54 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
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05/16/2004 05:54:07 PM |
| I'd like a bit more light on the still life and more oof in the brown background. Certainly captured a duo that's not a cliche! :) |
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05/13/2004 12:24:52 AM |
| would have fit the opposites challenge. Not a real appealing photo though. Lots of noise and the background is dreadful. |
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05/12/2004 08:24:47 PM |
| Neat still life, toothpick in it? |
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05/12/2004 05:15:36 PM |
| Sorry, I find more here I want to change than I want to leave as is. I want the side of the strawberry I am looking at more well lit, I want a fresher strawberry. I want a different color towel. I want the strawberry lifted off the onion with a toothpick, preferably silver, and I want less glare on the surface of the onion. |
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05/12/2004 01:24:31 AM |
| dont like the lighting here..maybe it's the angle |
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05/11/2004 01:29:32 PM |
| Well, it certainly is not something I shoot all the time - interesting combination. Composition is fine - the "layering" of the onion on the right adds a nice touch. Exposure is good, but better front lighting on the strawberry would help pop the red out. |
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05/11/2004 10:42:19 AM |
| It's grainy, and the lefthand towel buckle is a bit distracting, but I had to give you a 10, just for the idea. This is the stuff I had hoped to see more of in the challenge! |
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05/10/2004 06:39:43 PM |
Something new indeed. ;.)
A wee bit more light on the strawberry would not have hurt. 7 |
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05/10/2004 04:22:37 PM |
| Now, that's an amusing juxtaposition! The brown background bothers me just a touch, perhaps because of the purity of the other colors. Good composition! |
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05/10/2004 03:46:31 PM |
| is this an out-take of opposites...I like eitherway |
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05/10/2004 08:09:18 AM |
| Good composition and nice use of colours. Strawberry can be a bit lighter. 8 from me although the combination has put my tastebuds off food for the day. |
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05/10/2004 01:16:30 AM |
| beautiful lighting. This image would probably do well in the "opposites" challenge. |
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05/10/2004 01:02:36 AM |
| there is a cast of underexposure going down the middle of the strawberry, detracting from it. the carpeted background is not very appealing. interesting idea, pairing these two together - definately something new |
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