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The shore limit
The shore limit
GabrielS


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Sand (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 12-24mm f/4.0G IF-ED
Location: Mallorca - Es trenc
Date: Jan 4, 2009
Aperture: f/14
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1s
Galleries: Seascapes, High Dynamic Range (HDR)
Date Uploaded: Jan 4, 2009

Five exposures from one RAW 1 stop apart each. Combined using photomatix. Imported into CS3. Minor retouching.
-Correct tilted horizon.
-Resize
-sharpening (50,0.5,0)
-safe for web.

Statistics
Place: 61 out of 124
Avg (all users): 5.5577
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 5.2609
Avg (non-participants): 5.6818
Views since voting: 646
Views during voting: 285
Votes: 156
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
01/19/2009 12:32:25 PM
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:

composition: The shore line creates a very nice leading line for the photo. also, the horizon is in a good spot, as each of the bushes lead your eye to the center of the image. But, with that, there isn't a subject in the center, so it kinda loses that impact.

color: nice colors, but all a little bland. non have a concrete 'pop' effect. that may have been what you were going for though, so i'll leave it at that.

contrast: good contrast, but the sky could have really been pushed to the limit here, making it much more dramatic.

focus:
good focus, nice use of a small aperture for overall sharpness

depth of field
: again, good choice of f14.

lighting: nice overcast lighting

other: to me, this could have been much more dramatic, especially that you used HDR. But, some like to keep it simple, and i think this is what you were going for. i think that's what may have hurt your score, it just didn't have enough pop or WOW effect. I think this is a nice image, so to each his/her own, i suppose. Keep shooting, I'm looking forward to watching your profile grow! If you have any questions, feel free to PM me any time.
-Kari Ann

Message edited by author 2009-01-19 12:34:02.
01/12/2009 12:56:06 AM
attractive sky/sand lagoon location & nice edit.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/10/2009 04:26:22 PM
Like the composition and tones.
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01/05/2009 01:11:59 PM
Nice wilderness shot. The debris edge adds a nice definition.
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