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Alone and Broken
Alone and Broken
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Challenge: Sand (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 EX DC HSM for Canon
Location: North Sea, Hornsea, UK
Date: Jan 4, 2009
Aperture: F4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Seascapes, Textures
Date Uploaded: Jan 4, 2009

Rotated,Levels, Contrast, USM, H&S, Shadow&Highlights, Crop, USM, Exposure/Brighten, Burn, Save For Web

Statistics
Place: 80 out of 124
Avg (all users): 5.2357
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1277
Avg (non-participants): 5.2818
Views since voting: 617
Views during voting: 277
Votes: 157
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
01/19/2009 12:42:05 PM
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:

composition:
nicely composed, considering such an odd subject.

color: Colors are nice and earthy. i like the greens in the wood, they add a lot.

contrast:
nice contrast, really nicely controlled.

focus:
love the detail you captured in the wood and sand, the footprints are also a nice touch in focus.

depth of field:
good choice using f4, makes the wood posts detail even more pronounced.

lighting:
After reading through the comments, I agree with them. The sky is just too bright, and could have been better either at sunrise or sunset.

other:
overall, this is an 'OK' photo. I like the subject, and the title relating, but it just doesn't have enough 'WAPOW!' to send me over the hills for it. I think this is where your score was effected. Also, that sky was probably a big factor in the lower votes, and a little distraction is the pole out in the water, perhaps you could clone that out as well. But you defiantly have an eye for unusual yet interesting things, and you compose them beautifully. I hope you achieve your 6+ score goal soon, you're so close! Keep it up! If you have any other questions, feel free to PM me.
-Kari Ann
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/11/2009 07:31:07 AM
A nicely composed picture but lacks interest. Colors are bland and the sky is uninteresting. The footprint adds some balance. A good practice shot.
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01/10/2009 11:56:40 PM
It's a nice image and I scored it accordingly, but next time you might want to edit out some of those footprints in the sand.
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01/07/2009 07:50:53 PM
Strong picture, I just dont like su much the sky.
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01/05/2009 08:39:47 AM
This is a good image that I think could have been real dramitc with morning or evening light. composed nicely though
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01/05/2009 04:48:30 AM
needed a dramatic sky to complete it (I know it can't always be helped)
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