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The Path To Lonely Beach
The Path To Lonely Beach
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Sand (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS
Location: Atlantic City, NJ
Date: Jan 1, 2009
Aperture: f/4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Landscape, Nature
Date Uploaded: Jan 4, 2009

hot Raw. Adjusted Exposure, Saturation. Clarity. Opened in PS3: Adjusted levels, exposure, selective colors. Cropped. Converted to JPG. USM. Adjusted Exposure again. Saved for web.

Statistics
Place: 103 out of 124
Avg (all users): 4.8968
Avg (commenters): 6.3333
Avg (participants): 4.7111
Avg (non-participants): 4.9727
Views since voting: 591
Views during voting: 280
Votes: 155
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
01/17/2009 09:04:10 PM
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:

composition: A bit offputting with the horizon being dead center. maybe more of the path could have been included to tie in with the title better.

color: I love the neutral tones, very pleasing and just perfect for the scene

contrast: contrast could have been too soft for some, but I think it fits the mood quite well. a very peaceful and serene spot

focus: very nice and even across the entire scene presented

depth of field:
I like the use of a wide aperture, it gives the photo a soft yet sharp look.

lighting:
I would suggest the fill light as well, or a bump in shadows in photoshop. perhaps it would have given this photo more kick. but a very nice sunset in the background

other: All in all, i think this was a nice image. But nothing popped off the image or made me go, "WOA!". i think that's why most voters gave this an average or lower score. But, for technical processes props, you did very well in my eye. just try different compositions when viewing a scene, and give it a whirl. Hope this helped you some, if you have any more questions, feel free to PM me. keep shooting!
-Kari Ann
 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/08/2009 12:49:58 AM
I think I would have cropped out the "keep off" sign and kicked up the fill light. It is a nice setting and interesting texture.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/07/2009 08:05:17 PM
There's a lot going on here. Would have loved to see the shot without the sign.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/07/2009 03:22:14 AM
This look familiar about a year ago nice image
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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