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The Dying Habbit
The Dying Habbit
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Challenge: Habits (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F828
Location: Tobu Hotel in Japan
Date: May 15, 2004
Date Uploaded: May 15, 2004

 cropped and slightly ajusted the mid tones

Dying habbit as in "Smoking kills"
Dying as in "no longer as popular as it was"

Statistics
Place: 210 out of 256
Avg (all users): 4.2491
Avg (commenters): 4.1000
Avg (participants): 4.0811
Avg (non-participants): 4.3701
Views since voting: 951
Votes: 265
Comments: 11
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05/21/2004 11:44:35 AM
Visually cluttered (that vent in the lower right corner, the door breaking up the background, the blurry foreground. Nothing particularly interesting about this scene. It shows a habit but not in a new or interesting way.
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 05/21/2004 08:30:48 AM
Good selection of point of view. More depth of field is required to make this angle work though; The blurred foreground is a distraction. Would also be nice if the chairs were aligned to create a repeating pattern.
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 05/20/2004 09:01:11 PM
The flash makes this shot look flat. Try disabling your flash, and taking more pictures!
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 05/19/2004 06:14:12 PM
In any language, right. Like the way, whatever they are, leads your eye to the sign and your use of DOF. Lighting could be better.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/19/2004 04:53:07 PM
I know what you are trying to convey, but the image lacks punch. the dof is lacking, the out of focus chairs need cropping out. The lighting is awful and needs some external light source.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/19/2004 04:48:16 PM
Yea. English is ok for me.
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 05/19/2004 03:04:14 PM
should have used room lighting instead of flash...
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 05/19/2004 09:53:02 AM
Dubious composition, nothing in focus
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/19/2004 08:28:33 AM
Good Title !

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 05/19/2004 01:46:42 AM
nice point of view
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 05/19/2004 12:45:44 AM
a bit much on the flash, nice focus though
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