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clock tower erection near public park
clock tower erection near public park
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Centered Composition (Advanced Editing II)
Collection: challenges
Camera: Pentax Optio 555
Location: waterbury
Date: May 15, 2004
Date Uploaded: May 15, 2004

lots of phallic imagery conjured up- but it didn't come in well, it was up against rather stiff competition.

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Place: 219 out of 240
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Votes: 165
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06/12/2004 10:39:38 AM
feels so phallic
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/19/2004 10:34:48 AM
The subject matter is too far away to make a strong visual statement. It's a rather boring shot.
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05/18/2004 12:53:20 PM
Don't think this scene works as a centered shot.
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05/17/2004 05:00:12 PM
I'd have used the 'distort' or 'perspective' tools in PS to correct the leaning verticals on the right. Sky is a bit washed out... a little less exposure would have helped, you could have rescued the shadow detail using curves in PS. Shot is lacking a 'wow' factor for me.
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05/17/2004 04:45:29 PM
even though the clock tower is in the center of the composition it looks very odd there so far away from me, the spectator... It looks as if the parc and the trees are the main subjects of interest and then suddenly there is that tower! The effect is, mentioned already, odd and I don't realy like it..but on the other hand you score some points for making creative use of the centered composition by overruling all rules about it!!
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05/17/2004 12:45:48 AM
Good use of leading lines. Tower looks like it's leaning slightly. I think this would work better if it were more tightly cropped - the sky is fairly hazy and blah, so the less of it in the picture the better. And perhaps a polarizing filter to darken the sky as well.
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