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03/21/2009 06:03:01 AM |
| please feel free to update with more info on what you were thinking. I'd love to read more about this. It's great! |
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03/17/2009 10:50:51 PM |
| Centered composition works well and the lockers/doors with reflections do a great job framing your subject. This reminds me of how difficult high school and adolescence can be. |
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03/17/2009 08:53:33 PM |
| Ceiling is out. Darker maybe. |
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03/17/2009 04:03:08 PM |
Awesome shot... i love how the colours are limited to red/white/black, and the reflection in the floor. Looks like a hospital, but this would also be cool in a school hallway. 8
Bumped up to 10, and added to favourites. |
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03/17/2009 10:29:47 AM |
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03/17/2009 06:18:17 AM |
| Interesting image with nice creative composition. The reflections work well and make it seem as if the girl is hovering or levitating. 7 |
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03/17/2009 06:07:53 AM |
reminds me of 'shining'... great atmosphere six from me
;D brano |
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03/17/2009 02:17:14 AM |
| Not sure what is it, but you created very appealing composition - colors, lines, reflections - all works very well together. |
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03/16/2009 11:27:03 PM |
| This shot screams "stock"! Great job on the conceptual theme, "alienation" is another. |
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03/16/2009 08:53:22 PM |
| Such a different photo, it's a great thing, love the colors and lines. |
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03/16/2009 03:40:04 AM |
| Well captured and presented. This probably asks more questions than it answers. I like that. |
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03/15/2009 10:48:17 PM |
| recommend you darken the tones of the floor reflections more (you may have to do this selectively), Nice abstract. good technique , well executed. You have to experiment with the post processing more. 6 |
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03/15/2009 07:57:16 PM |
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03/15/2009 05:13:59 PM |
| This is a different perspective. Very well done. 8 |
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03/15/2009 04:41:28 PM |
| I would have loved to see this shot with the lights down the hall off. It's still a great composition. 8 |
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03/15/2009 11:25:18 AM |
| Good perspective and composition. |
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03/15/2009 10:10:25 AM |
| The red, white and black colours make a strong graphic image, well done. |
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03/15/2009 01:26:43 AM |
| I love how this picture is composed with the ground level perspective. Well done. 8. |
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03/15/2009 12:20:15 AM |
| The processing enhances this image very well. I love the concept. (voted earlier comment only now) |
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03/14/2009 06:07:57 PM |
| Great, great , great - the only thing: less floor |
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03/14/2009 05:07:39 PM |
| Good clarity and well framed |
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03/14/2009 10:34:38 AM |
| Very effective use of framing. Almost psychedelic in its effect. |
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03/14/2009 09:15:17 AM |
| Wow. Perfect use of central composition. a very intriguing shot. 8. |
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03/14/2009 03:26:48 AM |
| Love the horizontal stripes with all the vertical lines, inspired! |
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03/14/2009 02:47:54 AM |
| A fave for this. Fluorescent lights are often poor for interesting shots, but you have taken good advantage of them and also conveyed your title well. |
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03/14/2009 01:28:26 AM |
| I like it. Its different and very interesting in an edgy, artsy sort of way. I love the clean bold lines. |
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03/14/2009 12:10:04 AM |
| The repititions are what really creates the interst in this photo, the color being limited to just three colors furthur drives the interest. I don't know if it was by design or by accident, but the horizontal stripes of the sweatshirt adds a nice bit of graphical whimisy. |
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03/13/2009 11:49:25 PM |
| I love the lines and reflections - very fine centered composition! |
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03/13/2009 09:53:30 PM |
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03/13/2009 07:21:02 PM |
| clear focus, clean colors |
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03/13/2009 06:39:03 PM |
| Love that reflective floor. |
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03/13/2009 04:30:01 PM |
| The leading lines, light and shadow, the reds whites and blacks, the stripes repeated both horizontally and vertically, the reflection continuing in the floor...all of these combine to a make a great picture. You have a great eye!! This is not a picture that I typically would like, however, you have combined all the elements so well, I love it!! Bumping it to a 10. |
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03/13/2009 03:49:19 PM |
| Better not be there when the mop and wax crew comes by. |
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03/13/2009 03:03:42 PM |
| nice use of a low POV, and the semi-high key works too |
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03/13/2009 11:34:44 AM |
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03/13/2009 08:52:51 AM |
| Very nice. I love the sitter and the colors are nice and natural. |
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03/13/2009 06:11:48 AM |
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03/13/2009 04:35:27 AM |
| I like the dialog between the stripes of sorts |
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03/13/2009 04:03:15 AM |
Takes me back to my school days when I was sent out of class to sit in the hall :)
Really nice colours and engaging POV |
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03/13/2009 03:32:01 AM |
Quick, somebody tip that janitor! Them's some seriously nice floors!
Great pic too btw. I 10ve the idea of the vertical lines of the school contrasting with the horizontal lines of the child who appears to be not getting along or running against the grain.
If you look really closely, you will notice that there is a subtle rhythm of horizontal lines along the top which have a 'leading' effect suggesting unrealized motion in that direction, presumably an exit.
Very interesting pic. |
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03/12/2009 11:45:04 PM |
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03/12/2009 10:38:32 PM |
| Terrific! Colors, composition and processing- all great! |
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03/12/2009 09:27:49 PM |
| 1/4 Hard Candy + 1/4 Shining + 1/4 Elephant + 1/4 Paranoid Park = a perfect cocktail. 8 |
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03/12/2009 09:14:03 PM |
| great color and placement |
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03/12/2009 04:26:37 PM |
| Nice shot, the coloring and reflection are prefect. |
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03/12/2009 04:07:19 PM |
| Simple and good. Nice shot. |
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03/12/2009 03:37:11 PM |
| creative photo, love the reflections on the floor, the lines and the red / white colors |
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03/12/2009 03:00:25 PM |
| Such an emotional image. Love how you chose to shoot them from behind. Gives it more impact. The reflections and red walls really add a lot. Great angle to boot. Well done. |
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03/12/2009 02:29:34 PM |
| Great light and relfetion. I love the symentry. |
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03/12/2009 12:09:28 PM |
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03/12/2009 11:40:58 AM |
| I wish there was a little less floor in this image, but the colors work very well. Whites are a little bright though. |
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03/12/2009 11:33:40 AM |
| I love the lines & the colors in this. The reflections work well, and the student (?) provides a great focal point. |
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03/12/2009 09:55:15 AM |
| INteresting play with lines here. The reflection really adds to this. The lines in the sweatshirt fit well with the perspectives of the ceiling - and there could be some metaphor here since the figure sort of rebels against the composition but at the same time fits neatly into it. 8 |
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03/11/2009 11:55:28 PM |
| great composition! I love the opposite lines of the hoodie verses the lines of the doors and hall. |
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03/11/2009 11:18:45 PM |
| Excellent composition. Nice "jail" suggestion with the striped hoodie. |
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03/11/2009 09:02:12 PM |
Ohhh.... too cool! The reflections making vertical lines yet broken in the middle with the horizontals. Lovely.
Not voting yet. |
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03/11/2009 08:50:00 PM |
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03/11/2009 07:42:50 PM |
| Just love the lines on this, both vertical and horizontal. Very bold colors, and the reflection on the floor is incredible. Great work. |
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03/11/2009 07:20:10 PM |
| Very cool shot! Love the lines, and the implied vanishing point. Interesting image. Nice job! |
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03/11/2009 05:18:16 PM |
| A wonderful sense of design and color in this emotive image! 9 |
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03/11/2009 04:42:49 PM |
| Whoever you are, you're a lines master! Clever clever work. |
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03/11/2009 02:35:34 PM |
| Very centered, but a nice reflection on the floor and I like the simple use of colors here. |
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03/11/2009 01:20:47 PM |
| All the complementing vertical and horizontal lines, from shadows to shirt, make this shot superb. |
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03/11/2009 12:42:37 PM |
| Interesting lines in this composition. |
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03/11/2009 11:18:19 AM |
| looks to posed, not like a real breakdown. well exposed and focused. |
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03/11/2009 11:12:56 AM |
| I like the red on one side and white on the other. Also, the vertical vs. horizontal lines. |
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03/11/2009 11:09:20 AM |
| Love the reflections on the floor. |
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03/11/2009 10:15:07 AM |
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03/11/2009 08:28:57 AM |
| i love the angle you shot at |
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03/11/2009 08:00:30 AM |
| maybe a bit too much glare (though that could cuase a breakdown for sure!) |
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03/11/2009 05:36:57 AM |
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