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05/25/2004 04:22:12 AM |
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05/24/2004 09:40:30 AM |
| The pattern on the chair back is in better focus than the face. Otherwise, this is a nice composition, with an effective model. |
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05/22/2004 04:25:53 AM |
| I like the tone but the focus seems a little soft |
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05/20/2004 10:53:15 PM |
| Conceptually, a good start to an idea. Technically, it leaves quite a bit to be desired. The lack of focus detracts from the shot and brings out too much of a "snapshot" characteristic for my taste. The sepia tone is a good choice, but unfortunately it's not enough to mask the haloing around so many of the high-contrast boundries. And with a bedspread that busy, a much shallower DOF would have served you many times better. |
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05/20/2004 04:37:53 PM |
| I like this as a portrait very much. The sepia tone gives it a timeless quality and the trouble expression is really wonderful. The harsh shadow where the hand is at the face is a little distracting - more fill light would help. The focus could be crisper, but it doesn't have to be completely sharp. It seems to capture the habit challenge well - more of the emotion of nail biting than the act of it. |
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05/19/2004 07:53:24 PM |
| looks like she moved or something |
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05/19/2004 01:48:38 PM |
| Cute model, nice facial expression, the only problem i see is that the background is blending too much with the shirt. Otherwise, cool photo. |
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05/19/2004 10:09:57 AM |
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05/19/2004 09:01:39 AM |
I don't know if you wanted the focus like that, but I think it would have been better if it was in focus, but thats just my opinion. I like the expression. I think its a bit tightly cropped from the top. The choice of tone is good. Maybe tweak the levels to darken the whole photo a bit?
Nice effort... |
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05/19/2004 08:14:50 AM |
The subject is not in focus, but the background is.
Maybe B&W instead of Sepia? |
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05/19/2004 07:48:49 AM |
| I've got that habit from time to time. I like the sepia effect, not as fond of the softness of the photo... |
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05/19/2004 03:55:20 AM |
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