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05/07/2009 05:11:22 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hmm, don't know what to make of this one... It fits the challenge, and it's clearly been carefully composed - you've got that nice diagonal of trees fading off into the distance. But something about it just doesn't quite come together... Maybe it's the lack of a clear subject, leaving the viewer's eye to drift backwards and forwards without being drawn to any one single item. Maybe it's the mood of the colours - the normally happy greens and yellows somehow acquire a slightly morose feel mixed in with the darkness above and the subject matter. Overall, the viewer is left with the impression that the artist was indeed trying to say something, but also ends up slightly frustrated with the unspecificity of the message.
Not a bad shot though, and you've got some interesting stuff in your portfolio - I look forward to seeing further entries from you :) |
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05/04/2009 08:38:14 PM |
| Already??? I always buy my tree like the night before. |
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05/03/2009 02:41:47 PM |
| Not sure what it is. Maybe the composition. Just comes off to me as a snap, I'm afraid, but I think there is really a lot more thought and effort in it. Wish I could nail it down for you better than that. |
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04/29/2009 01:24:10 PM |
| I think this would have more impact if there was at least one full tree, unobstructed, that was completely in focus. I like the shot a lot, but having just a part of the first tree in the frame being the only thing in focus takes away from it. Still a nice shot. |
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