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Week 18 - On Campus
Week 18 - On Campus
shalrath


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 85mm f/1.4D IF
Location: Ewha Women's University, Seoul
Date: Mar 3, 2009
Aperture: 2.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: May 3, 2009

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Comments: 8
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 The university campuses here are truly beautiful, and today we were out to see an Iranian film at the university when I came across this little garden with the park bench that I just couldn't pass up.

I'd really like a little feedback on how I might improve the colours here.

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 05/22/2009 04:29:51 PM
Love the pose and the setting. I played with the colors (selective color) and added a bit of cyan and magenta to the yellow (and reduced the yellow of the yellow) then did the same with neutral. Not sure it made a lot of difference and kinda do like the tones you have here to begin with.
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 05/21/2009 01:51:16 AM
I think this is great! love the casualness of it.
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 05/05/2009 11:39:21 PM
Sometimes I just play with the hue and saturation to see if I can get a palette that is more pleasing to my eye. I didn't really notice anything wrong with the color, though. Just giving you feedback as requested. Doesn't necessarily pop, but looks very natural and consistent with the realistic pose.
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 05/04/2009 08:17:26 PM
This is a beautiful natural looking portrait. I love the dof and the colour is okay. Maybe you could take the green down a fraction in the red and yellow?
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 05/04/2009 07:07:03 PM
Oh I think the colors are spot on! The hot spot on the upper right corner is a distraction to me. Maybe a square crop? Beautiful model and relaxed pose.
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 05/04/2009 02:35:39 PM
Very nice candid-portrait look. I love the bokeh and the good focus on the girl's face and hands, and the pose is interesting. If it's posed, maybe just bring her eyes just a touch more forward, but that's just an idea, not a complaint. Great job.
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 05/04/2009 07:03:01 AM
I think this is beautiful, nothing wrong with the colours, it's got a spring softness about it.
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 05/03/2009 10:58:15 PM
She has beautiful hands!! Nicely done, Dylan.
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