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06/01/2004 07:42:57 PM |
It would be better to me if the guy was in suit with starbucks in his hand and a cell phone on his belt. |
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06/01/2004 07:35:09 PM |
theO! You can't hide from nobody! The focus her seems slightly off and if you could have moved over an inch to your left, that annoying black spot could have been avoided. Good job, unique as always! |
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05/31/2004 10:45:44 PM |
You are always so creative. Lighting is good and effective. My nitpick is that I wish you would take a self portrait where you are smiling...you always seem so serious for such a handsome young man! :o) |
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05/30/2004 05:10:57 PM |
Something's really weird. For the banana challenge, you and I both decided it would be funny to smoke a banana. And for this challenge, we both used a monitor for lighting. Very, very interesting.
This one isn't as sharp as your usual self-portraits. Your right hand is overexposed a little, too.
I think the lighting is a little too uneven, but I like the concept. |
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05/29/2004 12:32:48 AM |
It's a good idea, but something about the very hard edges and angles on the bars of light bother me. |
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05/28/2004 02:21:41 PM |
Very interesting! Let's say that the lighting makes it! Otherwise ... well... :) |
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05/28/2004 12:05:34 AM |
Nicely captured. Nice colors and tone throughout. The right hand holding the coffe cup is just ever so slightly overexposed. |
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05/27/2004 09:19:33 PM |
I really like how the edge of the light parallells the edge of the laptop screen - makes it look like the god of computers is shining light upon him, or something like that. Nicely done. |
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05/27/2004 11:57:17 AM |
Great shot, love the look on this guy's face! |
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05/26/2004 07:36:55 PM |
strange expression on face dont get it |
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05/26/2004 04:37:47 PM |
Angular shadows and uneven light are ruining the composition in this pic. |
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05/26/2004 03:39:57 PM |
This one made me laugh. Great expression. Totally the way I feel right now (sadly). Also, great composition and very effective use of multiple light sources. Good luck with this one. I hope you do well. |
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05/26/2004 07:53:09 AM |
Great use of the lighting to frame the subject. |
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05/26/2004 05:03:45 AM |
The light on our right isn't quite strong enough on the models face to kill the shadows, maybe because the laptop blocks it, maybe not, not sure. The lights on the coffe cup and hand are a little strong. All that aside, this is a good image that should have broad appeal. |
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