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06/02/2009 12:14:48 AM |
I think you've got some really interesting subject matter in here, and the shot is well composed, but I think the lighting is really hurting this picture. There's a visible light source, but then there's these really harsh shadows which are clearly coming from a spot light off-camera. If you still have this set up available to you, I'd be really interested to see what it'd look like using just the light from the candle and a longer exposure time. I think it might really bring out some of the interesting textures on the typewriter and leather cover which are being lost to shadow or washed out from the harsh light. |
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06/01/2009 09:42:27 AM |
I like this one the second time I saw it - First impressing wasn't great, but it's growing on me. |
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05/28/2009 01:00:54 PM |
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05/28/2009 06:48:15 AM |
Great colors and latitude. Compostion is nicely done. |
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05/27/2009 09:49:30 PM |
I like this color palette. See if you can tone down the hot spot on the top book's bottom edge. |
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05/27/2009 03:54:25 PM |
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05/27/2009 09:03:23 AM |
Awesome! Only thing I don't like is the shadow under the book, but that's minor. |
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