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06/08/2009 01:27:42 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, I like how the subject is in the right side of the frame and how you have used a clean black for negative space. A couple of different things could have been done to make it a bit more dynamic though. From the higher angle, it looks like she is looking down on the flowers which is nice; however, the angle itself is rather stale. Higher might give it more of a dramatic feeling, or lower to show more of the detail of its face. If you really like this angle, I think zooming in and cropping it very very close.
Technically, I think this photo falls short. The focus is good, but the lighting is not. It looks underexposed and this causes it to seem very very flat, and un-appealing. With better/brighter lighting, I think this could have been a very intriguing still life.
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06/01/2009 09:19:56 AM |
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05/31/2009 10:13:48 PM |
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05/30/2009 02:30:37 PM |
| Nice objects for still life but slightly dark. |
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05/28/2009 01:13:50 PM |
| lovely subject, but a bit too dark and too much dead space i think |
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05/27/2009 11:37:59 AM |
| Interesting ceramic head. Wishing for more light on these objects. |
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