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Almost forgot that granite is a stone!
Almost forgot that granite is a stone!
Tammster


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Rocks, Stones, Pebbles (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: My kitchen, Loxahatchee, FL
Date: Jun 9, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 8
Galleries: Textures
Date Uploaded: Jun 9, 2009

I looked all week to find a cool rock, stone or pebble to photograph. Funny that I chopped up veggies on it and didn't even see it...

The best part was actually seeing this granite in ways I haven't in the three years that I've lived here. It's even more beautiful that I thought! So, even if I get low scores, it was really worth my time.

Statistics
Place: 139 out of 147
Avg (all users): 4.0734
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.0333
Avg (non-participants): 4.0886
Views since voting: 677
Views during voting: 300
Votes: 218
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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07/01/2009 07:22:40 PM
I didn't vote this challenge, but I just read through your notes on this shot and found them quite interesting. I have found the same thing, that photography makes me look at familiar things in new and unique ways. Instead of just seeing an item, I see the shapes, the subtleties of colors and patterns, and the way the light plays off of it all.

Though this image did poorly as an artistic challenge entry, a larger version would probably be quite nice as a desktop background or an overlay texture.

I agree, in spite of the low score, this challenge was a successful effort for you! (I've had a few of those successful low scores myself!)

Message edited by author 2009-07-01 19:29:06.
06/18/2009 09:27:14 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Composition:

I guess with this subject so closely framed there's not much that can be said about the composition as such, some areas in the shot do seem to have a bit more interest than others though so maybe a different crop would have worked slightly better.

Camera Work:

The focus seems a little soft I suspect this may have been handheld and I wonder if that 8 shutter speed was actually 1/8, pushing the ISO would have enabled a faster shutter which would have resulted in an overall sharper image I feel.

Post-Processing:

Unfortunately you haven't listed your processing steps so I cannot see what was done to the shot, I've taken the image into PS and found that with a boost to Hue / Sat and some contrast tweaks the colour are quite delightful and the browns glow almost golden like, I also added some sharpening and this helped with the focus issue considerably - it might be worth going over this image again and reprocessing it to see what improvements you can make.

My Opinion:

I think your subject matter was always likely to result in a low score unfortunately, even with perfect lighting and focus I think your options were fairly limited. But as you say in your notes you refound your "sight" on something not appreciated as much as it once was.

Overall a applaud your decision to go with a shot that had meaning to you and also the fact that you did so pretty much knowing it would result in a lower score, keep on shooting!

Good luck in future challenges!

Mark
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/15/2009 11:45:09 PM
Does not seem sharp enough. Also, without title or knowing the challenge I wouldn't quite know what I am looking at. I like the texture.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/15/2009 06:34:39 AM
cool 9
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06/14/2009 03:40:45 PM
windy title hurts this one.
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06/11/2009 12:01:47 AM
very busy - no real subject at all.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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