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06/09/2004 10:24:37 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a wonderful shot and all the positive things were said during the challenge, the black and white, the angle, the lighting. It tells a story in the picture and I like that. Makes me wonder where the balconies are :)
The only thing I see that throws me off a bit is the angle of the roof and the way it comes across the shot. It seems crooked and throws the shot off a bit for me. I like looking up at the doors but the roof makes me a bit disoriented with the angle, maybe if the shot was tilted just a bit to the left to make the roof straight.
Otherwise, excellent job!
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further! |
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06/05/2004 01:38:16 AM |
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06/04/2004 11:36:43 PM |
| Interesting angle and lighting. Rather centered, but this in one time when that works very well. |
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06/04/2004 12:45:28 AM |
| Fun point of view and very nice tones. Looks slightly over processed or oversharpened? |
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06/01/2004 01:39:46 PM |
| Very interesting perspective and I like it as a b/w, however it looks overexposed on the right side and oversharpened. |
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06/01/2004 02:01:23 AM |
| Really interesting subject and a nice shot. Great job. |
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05/31/2004 06:34:33 AM |
great point of view. love how the doors become a leading line to the peak of the roof pointing skyward like an arrow.
nice b&w treatment.
interesting to view. |
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05/31/2004 04:36:18 AM |
| Awesome, and a great find for the challenge. Great use of light here. |
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