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09/22/2009 09:34:12 PM |
| I second Yo_Spiff's tips and would add that you should have played with aperture to get a deeper DOF. I don't like the OOF look of the building in the bottom of the image. Also, your image lacks white, the white on it is not white. But I love the idea and the composition. Hope it helps. |
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09/22/2009 05:08:25 PM |
Responding to your "how do I improve?" post in the forums. I looked through your entries and found one that I thought had more potential, but as it is would have probably gotten a 4, or at best a 5 from me. Did my own edit on it. My major problem with it was I didn't care for the dim appearance and strong yellow cast to it. That may have been a creative choice on your part, but anyway, if it helps, the editing steps are in the notes.
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07/01/2009 03:08:44 AM |
| Thanks for the comments folks the appreciation and constructive critiscism are both very encouraging and very usefull ... this is the first entry I've made with which I was happy with the last two were unsatisfactory and well we never mention the first !!! |
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06/30/2009 11:59:48 PM |
| I like how it looks like the lines have been drawn in the sky. The only nitpick I have is that I wish the clouds didn't have a yellowish cast. Still tho, an interesting view! |
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06/29/2009 08:57:46 PM |
| Great sky but the entire building and sky runs all together. Dark. I think it is the reflection at the bottom that is throwing me off. |
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06/28/2009 06:32:54 PM |
| Title could be less literal, but i love the composition, especially for this challenge. |
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06/28/2009 12:33:35 AM |
| This really throws me for a loop. I can look at the structure in two different ways and come up with 2 completely different forms. Not sure how this was done but you made me stop and look at it for a bit. |
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06/28/2009 12:02:19 AM |
| great reflections, interesting yellow tint |
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06/24/2009 09:11:26 PM |
| The coloring really works with this photograph. The title needs a little workish, :)but otherwise a good interpretation of this challenge. |
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