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07/25/2009 10:07:56 AM |
Critique Club Critique
First Impressions
Good potential in this scene.
Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
The man getting in the car on the right detracts from the image overall. A difficult crop choice, but despite the good leading lines/element on the left, it doesn't lead anywhere interesting. The boy, your main subject, brought more into play by a much bolder crop (possibly even going square or vertical) would have made a stronger image, in my opinion. Some tweaking in post processing to bring the textures and colors out more would likely also have added some extra depth and feel.
Comments, Score & Placement Review
72/135 and a score of 5.16 is not bad - your commenters make some good and helpful points.
Summary
More refining in post processing, especially by composing your subject strategically within a selected cropped frame, would have brought this scene to life more. Well seen opportunity. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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07/20/2009 08:31:37 PM |
| Like the depth the fence gives. Nicely taken. |
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07/17/2009 02:31:10 PM |
| too much of shadow and white space but i liked the picture for greena nd brownish-grey shades |
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