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07/24/2009 04:57:14 PM |
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: Rather than being drawn to the texture of the dead flowers I'm distracted by the rather boring wall.
Composition: The central composition isn't doing this image any harm, then again, its not very interesting.
Tecnical: This doesn't 'pop' or have any 'wow' factor for me, exposure is ok but the focus is a little soft in places
Artistic: For me this is rather bland and have much artistic value sorry.
Overall thoughts: I guess you chose this location for the nice little crack? but I think it was the wrong choice. I just glanced at your profile and saw your top 2 submissions are flowers and am sure you agree that they are so much better than this. 5.5 is a good final score I think.
Get in touch if you'd like to discuss further Gennaro. |
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07/19/2009 11:46:15 PM |
| ah the dead flowers ploy... done Very Well! |
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07/14/2009 07:23:24 PM |
| Very nicely done and great lighting.Super detail. I love the textured wall as a background. |
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07/13/2009 05:36:39 PM |
| For me, the background kilss this image - otherwise I LOVE the flowers/vase. |
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07/13/2009 03:54:29 PM |
| Now this is nice. I love the way the crack in the wall seems to represent a rift between the two flowers as if they were two people who have argued or split which seems to be reflected in the title. Good work |
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07/13/2009 02:13:24 PM |
| With so many beautiful flowers entered in this challenge I think it was a misstep to choose something dead and bland. 3. |
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07/13/2009 08:28:21 AM |
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07/13/2009 07:48:23 AM |
| I like the dried roses and the crack in the wall. I think the composition could be improved by not centering it as much. |
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07/13/2009 12:08:32 AM |
| excellent texture throughout |
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