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07/29/2009 04:43:44 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I must admit that when it came up on my screen, I was shocked by all the colors. In a good way. I love the bold editing.
I think your composition is good. I also like the negative space on the right, there is enough room that neither the model nor the camera feel cramped. I really like the difference in DOF between the model and the photo on the display; it created a nice contrast between the two.
My biggest problem with the photo is that the alignment of the photo on the display is a little off and does not line up with the model (it seems a little high). I would have also liked to see more details on the camera and camera straps, so that the camera straps don't disappear into the yellow background.
You've done a great job with this photo. Feel free to pm me if you want any clarification.
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07/28/2009 04:42:54 PM |
Very creative. A ribbon contender for my money :-) |
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07/28/2009 02:21:16 PM |
Good concept, didn't like the color treatment. |
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07/28/2009 08:46:58 AM |
This is one of the photos that I have bumped up upon second view. Very cleverly done, I must have missed the point the first time. Definitely meets the challenge, well done! |
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07/28/2009 08:08:02 AM |
Yikes! Wonderfully strange shot :) Like it a lot |
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07/28/2009 01:10:12 AM |
Now there is a useful firmware hack! |
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07/27/2009 06:10:44 AM |
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07/27/2009 02:33:46 AM |
Very interesting interpretation. |
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07/25/2009 11:31:51 AM |
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07/23/2009 01:03:21 AM |
Good job meeting the challenge! I really like the colors. 10 |
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07/23/2009 12:37:54 AM |
Clever, and I really like the outrageous colors. |
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07/22/2009 11:45:40 AM |
clever, very clever, why did i not think of that. Just for the idea i would give it 10, but overall 8 |
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07/22/2009 08:38:48 AM |
This is a good idea but it didn't come off too well. It would make much more sense if only the photo in the back screen was a negative and everything else was a regular image. |
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07/22/2009 06:06:32 AM |
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07/22/2009 05:57:18 AM |
Very good idea, I like the play with negatives. I think it would have been better if the girl herself would have been in focus. |
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