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08/11/2009 09:08:40 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club.
For your first ever submission this is pretty good.
I think that there are several things about this shot that could be worked on.
A tighter crop would have helped this shot a little more. You have more plate on the bottom than at the top and the rest of flower is out of focus towards the top with a tiny piece of plate showing.
A different or deeper coloured oil would have made the oil or sunflower stand out more.
You are tack sharp and the focus is excellent on the flower. Your lighting is good as it brings out the true colours of the sunflower.
In post processing, maybe try flipping it around to see if that make the POV more pleasing.
I am looking forward to seeing more from you!
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08/07/2009 02:03:13 AM |
| the angle makes the image look like its 180 degrees turned. it makes the image look unstable. |
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08/03/2009 12:12:52 AM |
| shouldn't that be child floating on mother? |
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