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08/21/2009 06:38:37 PM |
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: I may be being a little anal here? I found a book called 'Well Water' but didn't find the rest of the title - maybe because you spelt 'responsibly' incorrectly? and surprised nobody picked you up on it. Anyway I don't vote on titles although confess to disliking overly long ones.
Composition: The placing of the bottle looks ok to me but the diagonal wood? splits the image and is rather distracting for me.
Subject: I quite like the label on the bottle as without it or the title it is just a plain bottle of water and does lack any real interest (apart from the background bokeh that I just adore!)
Technical: Exposure looks ok to me, the wood the bottle stands on is neither sharp nor all oof so is a little distracting for me and I feel the bottle could be a little sharper. Did I mention I love the background bokeh?.
Final thoughts: Not an interesting subject nor image for me sorry so if I voted it would probably have been a 4. |
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08/15/2009 02:40:36 PM |
| A better background or more unique bottle would help this concept. |
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08/15/2009 03:32:40 AM |
| I think the position of the camera is a little to low. Think about all the bear commercials. |
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08/14/2009 07:46:23 AM |
| I'd center it, harmonic colors, but didn't catch me, 5 |
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08/14/2009 02:14:43 AM |
| The shot is a little boring to me. An actual well with an old wooden bucket might have been better, assuming you could find one. |
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08/13/2009 11:53:49 AM |
| This one is a little bit blurry and just not the most interesting photo. Try a different angle. |
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