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09/02/2009 10:33:13 AM |
Hi from the C Club
YOu asked for an in depth comment on your shot.
1st impression, it is very out of focus. try moving back from the subject when you have to go macro with your lens. you can zoom in in Photoshop to get what you are after. Some contrast to separate things would have helped as well. Flipping the canvas so that it was on the bottom looking up would have been more pleasing the eye
good try, |
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08/30/2009 11:33:33 PM |
| I can't find anything in focus. Manual or auto? |
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08/24/2009 10:23:48 PM |
| not enough sharp focus on this, if you had focused on the petal and let the "veins" of the flower be your abstract part of this you would have done better |
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08/24/2009 03:08:42 AM |
| like this composition and color. could a tad more sharpened in my eyes |
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08/24/2009 12:25:35 AM |
I like the position of the object and the yellow is nice too, but it's too much black space and too OOF in my opinion! It looks like a good idea though.
Good luck to you, sorry if i was rude. |
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