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Lost in the Sea
Lost in the Sea
BeefnCheez


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Where's Waldo? IV (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: Kitchen
Date: Sep 6, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/13
Galleries: Animals, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Sep 6, 2009

Waldo is lost in the sea of goldfish! Where could this striped fish be..

hmm i changed this description i thought.. but yea, i knew this wouldn't do well, but I wanted to enter something so this is the outcome

Statistics
Place: 68 out of 73
Avg (all users): 4.5246
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.4857
Avg (non-participants): 4.5402
Views since voting: 681
Views during voting: 375
Votes: 122
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
09/17/2009 07:42:32 PM
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Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
Can't see anyone. But I haven't been much good at finding them so far with other entries in this Challenge. On first impressions the subjects look too small to have a person in there...

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
Ok, just read your Photographer's Comments. Yes, I saw the stripey fish, no it didn't seem to fit the Challenge description for me. Yes, I understand you 'changed this description' and 'wanted to enter something', I understand that urge to enter, but changing the description of the Challenge like this, in a challenge such as this one, just doesn't work and makes it look like you misunderstood the Challenge or didn't read the description.

As is, it is difficult for me to properly critique this submission.

I can mention that the toning seems harsh and the oversaturation isn't enhancing your subjects. The out of focus areas at the bottom of the frame also detract.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
68/73 is not bad considering there is no person in there. Quite a few comments in-Challenge and an average score from them of 5 makes me wonder whether they were not holding the Challenge theme strongly in mind or liked your interpretation or gave you the benefit of the doubt and assumed they could not find a person.

Ok, just the read the comments received and there's a bit of a mix in there of how they perceive this image and your interpretation for this Challenge.

Summary
I don't think this fits the Challenge, no matter how 'out of the box' you want to be. I understand the concept, but perhaps choosing the other Challenge theme (Back to School II) may have been easier to shoot for.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/14/2009 08:37:04 AM
Waldo is lost in the sea of goldfish! Where could this striped fish be..

That would be Nemo, not Waldo. oops, wrong book.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/13/2009 11:39:59 PM
Maybe I'm missing it. I can't seem to find waldo anywhere. Hope he's explained in your notes.
Back Sunday night -
Wait, it's the stripes isn't it?
I'm a dummy. Bumping up.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/13/2009 10:37:02 PM
Nice hue, but I'm not finding waldo, 5.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/10/2009 12:55:32 PM
Can't see him
09/08/2009 06:13:49 PM
I think I see what you were going for but the description says to hide a person. I don't see a person, just a striped cracker.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/07/2009 10:45:22 PM
You've made me crave chocolate now and I was being SO good LOL! Very different concept and effective. Made me think!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/07/2009 10:11:41 PM
wow, you must have really hid your person well.. I've been looking & looking and can't see them at all..
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/07/2009 08:12:25 AM
waldo is a fish.....funny
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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