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Old Rust Bucket
Old Rust Bucket
jawsh3539


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: HDR II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D
Location: Ogden City, Utah
Date: Sep 13, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/40
Galleries: Abstract, High Dynamic Range (HDR)
Date Uploaded: Sep 13, 2009

This truck is part of the decor to a local restaurant. It caught my eye and so I pointed my lens at it.

Statistics
Place: 14 out of 155
Avg (all users): 6.7350
Avg (commenters): 7.3684
Avg (participants): 6.4659
Avg (non-participants): 6.9464
Views since voting: 2689
Views during voting: 524
Votes: 200
Comments: 26
Favorites: 5 (view)


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09/25/2009 11:38:30 AM
Hi from the Critique Club

You asked for a comment from a Critique Club member.

Nice placement for this shot and good all around comments during your voting period, even your wife thinks so!!!

I think what this shot is lacking is details. It is very smooth, with HDR the finer details of a shot are meant to shine on through. Here it is very smooth and no textures to be seen. Back off a little on the noise adjustment or the Topaz. Your colours are very rich , almost too rich. Using a layer of black and white would have helped with this shot and it would have also brought out more of those details that are lacking. Your DOF could do with some more contrast, your POV could have been a little lower, just to get teh steering wheel out of the center there.

Overall, you did a great job, I am looking forward to seeing more of your work!
09/23/2009 11:08:30 AM
got a 10 from me:) good job, nice score and placement
09/22/2009 08:04:43 PM
Great shot, congrats on such a high finish on your first entry. I agree with the comment below it does look a lot like nikonjeb. I think you might like some of his work.

Back to your shot. I like it. It's a little over the top but thats ok, and thats kinda the idea with this challenge. I would love to see the individual shots you combined. I also agree that black and white would probably look good too. Good job.
09/21/2009 12:38:09 AM
Great score for a first entry. Congrats on the top 20 finish!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/20/2009 01:11:28 PM
Nice tones and details.
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09/20/2009 09:38:28 AM
I love that the picture is so rich in color and texture. I don't agree with those saying it's to over done, That's what HDR is about. Amazing Job!!!
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09/19/2009 11:25:01 PM
Looks a bit more like Topaz, than HDR, but that's okay.
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09/19/2009 11:10:54 PM
I like the painted feel to this.
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09/18/2009 03:52:42 PM
a bit much for me, and yet still very appealing-10
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09/18/2009 04:58:42 AM
ANOTHER one? Surely you must be bored of this place by now? ;o) (If not NikonJeb then I apologise - carry on shooting!)

Nice glow effect though.
09/17/2009 10:21:52 PM
Very cool colors and details, I feel like I am peeking through the window.
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09/17/2009 07:01:03 PM
Wow, I never thought rust could be so positively gorgeous!
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09/17/2009 06:07:34 AM
Great shot - One of the best in this challenge -10
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09/16/2009 11:28:44 PM
The colors are too warm for me and it's overprocessed for my taste. I like the textures and the perspective adds a lot to the composition, so as the light.
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09/16/2009 09:50:01 PM
Very pretty, great HDR and mood set. A little over saturated for my taste. Would love to see this B&W or a bit more de-sat. Love the feeling it makes. Cracked window is cool, looks like spider web. Good job, hope you get the score you were looking for!
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09/16/2009 05:12:03 PM
Very well done. Love the red tones.
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09/16/2009 02:01:58 PM
Nice choice of subject. Saturation is a tad more IMO. A more unsaturated grunge effect is a best fit for this subject.

Raj
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09/16/2009 09:00:58 AM
You have managed to give this old rust bucket some really cool, soft and gentle character. I like it. Hope everyone else agrees.
10
:)
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09/16/2009 12:06:38 AM
This is screaming Nikonjeb to me. If this is not Jeb's entry, then that should be taken as a compliment.
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09/15/2009 10:44:45 PM
It's a bit overdone, but it works for this subject. I like the colours. I think the composition could be improved by having the steering wheel a little more off centre.
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09/15/2009 08:05:47 PM
Terrific detail and colors. 9
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09/15/2009 06:16:11 PM
A little OTT... but I happen to like that: 7
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09/15/2009 05:12:11 PM
Nice use of HDR to bring out all the details. The processing is somewhat overdone, but in a skillful way. Looks great, love the colors.
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09/15/2009 02:06:48 PM
I shall be rating this challenge by the following criteria:

1 - Not HDR in my opinion

3 - HDR is way over-done, in my opinion

5 - A reasonable use of HDR, but not a very engaging photo, in my opinion

7 - A reasonable use of HDR, and an engaging photo, in my opinion

10 - A fantastic use of HDR, and an out of this world photo, in my opinion

Your photo receives:

3
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09/15/2009 10:06:36 AM
By far the best!! I guarantee if not first, you will be in the top three with this pic.... beautiful!!
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09/15/2009 03:11:37 AM
don't think your'e gonna need anyone to say how well done this is. Classic.
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