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When is She Going to Call?
When is She Going to Call?
jbeazell


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Waiting (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S602Z
Location: In my Living Room
Date: Jun 8, 2004
Aperture: 6.3
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/4
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jun 8, 2004

 Slight brightness and contrast adjustments. Slight USM, and crop / resize. Almost entirely straight out of the camera.

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Place: 211 out of 309
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Avg (commenters): 4.4444
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Avg (non-participants): 4.7793
Views since voting: 717
Votes: 288
Comments: 9
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/13/2004 02:21:40 AM
The man is too far away from the phone to be like waiting for someone's call.
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 06/12/2004 11:05:40 PM
Fish tank distracts my attention
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 06/12/2004 12:24:59 PM
Perfect DOF, but it looks a little staged.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/11/2004 11:22:08 AM
Great shot, well composed. I think I'd skip having the fish tank in the photo, but I like the focus on the phone and the melodramatic guy in the background.
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 06/10/2004 08:08:38 PM
Kinda good idea, bad compostion/exposure.
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 06/10/2004 07:25:29 AM
Superb composition, good take on challenge. I wish this had been lit a lot better though.
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 06/09/2004 04:45:24 PM
good concept, but needed slightly better staging and lighting. The fish tank is distracting, and I would have avoided it. The photo is underexposed, and I probably would have used a more shallow depth of field.
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 06/09/2004 03:44:11 PM
The "waiting" element doesn't come across as strongly as it should. Reducing the size of the phone and increasing the size of the man (perhaps having him look at his watch) would have strengthened the message. The phone's yellow tint is distracting.
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 06/09/2004 01:16:37 AM
good idea
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