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06/26/2004 07:44:38 PM |
From the critique club;
Very nice conposition and the sepia gives it that vintage flavor. The tone and the comp are 7-8. I am a sucker for sepia so I'll give you an 8. The focus point is not the front of the subject and although this is not serious, it shows me very nice detail in the brick wall and the sides of the subject but it leaves the detail in the front a little ambiguous. The eye then follows the white and suddenly drops to what may appear like a picture within a picture. I look and look and can not decipher that lower left rectangle. I can surmize that I am looking underneath the back wall.
Although the above seems hyper critical, the picture does invite the eye and the overall feel is the important chemistry. It is very difficult to find a perfect picture, but here you took great care to keep lines perpendicular to the horizontal plane and it is a rather neat image with impressive contrast. |
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06/18/2004 02:48:02 PM |
| Great train shot! Black and white does well here. I like the setting also, it really plays to your title |
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06/15/2004 07:59:25 PM |
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06/14/2004 01:19:37 PM |
| NIce picture. I like the composition and focus here. But imho I don't think the b&w is working. There is very little contrast between the roof of the engine against the wall. |
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06/14/2004 05:31:51 AM |
| Cool little engine, nice use of black and white. |
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