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Tori
Tori
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Challenge: Centered Composition IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Location: Drexel University
Date: Nov 13, 2009
Aperture: f/16
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Nov 14, 2009

I was in a workshop at Drexel university. I was in a studio shooting with a canon 5D and a strobe flash. White background that is about 5 ft away from the subject. Adjusted the color for contrast

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Place: 147 out of 199
Avg (all users): 4.9502
Avg (commenters): 5.4286
Avg (participants): 5.1053
Avg (non-participants): 4.8690
Views since voting: 648
Views during voting: 327
Votes: 221
Comments: 8
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11/24/2009 11:43:01 AM
not a bad picture...it just does not engage me as much as others do
11/22/2009 09:38:29 AM
A fun portrait . I would probably crop tighter on your model. 2 things will then happen
You will get more detail on her beautiful face and you will eliminate some of the dead space above her head.
This is a strong image, nonetheless, Good lighting
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11/20/2009 05:30:14 PM
I would have cropped a little closer (the hand makes her seem too self-conscious) and placed the bubble in the very center. You can get bigger bubbles if you don't use real bubble gum, but a balloon instead!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
11/20/2009 02:38:23 PM
Nice pose and lighting 6 .. i don't think the extra background on the top is adding any interest to the picture, except that it makes this picture fit the challenge. IMO what would have worked better is a closer crop so that the bubblegum becomes the center of the frame .. i would have given it a 10 with that crop!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
11/20/2009 01:40:55 PM
A fun shot. Not sure if all the negative space at the top is doing much for it, but that's probably a personal preference thing, as it was clearly intentional. Otherwise, I like this.
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11/20/2009 11:54:03 AM
Looks a bit like a snapshot, could be more worked on.
11/19/2009 09:34:58 PM
Nice portrait good colors...6
11/19/2009 09:25:13 AM
I'm not keen on the way you cropped the hand it almost makes it seem like it isn't her hand.
Also for my taste I would back off the red a bit but that's just personal opinion. 5
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