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Challenge: Centered Composition IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D3X
Lens: Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
Location: my living room
Date: Nov 17, 2009
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Nov 17, 2009

lit with a profoto 2x2 softbox almost direct, slightly above,
-barely any photoshop, levels in cs4, brightness/contrast, got lucky with the natural vignette
eyes of the gas mask were simply done with black construction paper to black them out

i like it, hopefully others do too.

Statistics
Place: 111 out of 199
Avg (all users): 5.3333
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3425
Avg (non-participants): 5.3288
Views since voting: 797
Views during voting: 356
Votes: 219
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)


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11/30/2009 02:33:23 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Interesting image that really makes you go hmmm. Its certainly has a certain edge to it and perhaps some might have felt a bit uncomfortable with it. Technically the image is solid: exposure is good and I like the fall of the light on the edges that creates the vignette.

The scene itself is a little lackluster and the window behind the subject (you?) might be considered a distraction. I think that the image might be more effective if the background more closely matched the mood you were trying to set. A guy sitting on a couch with a gas mask? weird. A guy sitting on a couch in an abandoned warehouse? Pretty damn cool. Naturally that would be a little tougher to arrange...

In terms of the challenge theme my opinion is that its just fine it works but its not as strong of connection as it might have been. Central compostion was used but the question is: Was it the best choice? Maybe maybe not.

Ovwerall a pretty solid image and one explored an interesting concept.
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11/25/2009 12:57:38 PM
this was awesome. i'm sad more people didn't realize that.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/24/2009 11:10:01 PM
right 8
11/24/2009 01:21:18 PM
not exactly the most engaging of images
11/22/2009 04:33:51 PM
Mom served refried beans with dinner again, eh?
11/22/2009 11:06:29 AM
A very interesting portrait indeed. Don't be afraid to get closer to your subject. Show the detail!
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11/21/2009 10:28:03 AM
This is great. Love the concept and the technicalities of the shot are perfect. Wonderful composition, lighting and post processing. Fantasic image. In my top five of the challenge. 9
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11/20/2009 07:39:15 PM
wow, that's cool and a little wierd. :) 9
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11/19/2009 06:02:32 PM
"Are you my mummy?"
-- Doctor Who episode
11/19/2009 11:11:50 AM
I like the lighting, it's very harsh and completely relates to the theme.
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