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12/04/2009 05:37:27 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: I like the leading lines you created with this composition. It serves as a terrific guide for my wandering eye. It grabs me, leads me in, thus leaves me with enough interest to explore the remainder of the image.
My ideas for improvement: I'd really, really like to see more interest in the sky. I think that even some contrast adjustment may have added enough drama to make it more appealing. I also think that I'd like to see your point of view moved either a little higher or a little lower to change the line of mountains that are behind the building. My eye wants to see those either above or below the building. It is a bit distracting running through the main focal point of the image.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I did not vote in this particular challenge, but this would have drawn a 5 from me. I do think that it fits the challenge well, and there are some nice strengths in your capture. With a more dramatic or colorful sky and a different point of view, I believe that this one could have easily grown the vote.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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11/29/2009 01:59:55 PM |
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11/29/2009 11:35:43 AM |
Nice composition with good strong lines. 10 |
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11/27/2009 11:09:49 PM |
this has such beautiful balance. I love it |
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11/27/2009 10:43:00 AM |
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11/26/2009 07:12:13 PM |
Good composition great sky and nice use of diagonal lines |
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11/24/2009 05:31:13 PM |
I like the POV in this shot. Pretty heavy on the water, though. |
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11/23/2009 09:22:06 PM |
I like the landscape, but the manor and the fountain (?) are lacking in detail. |
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11/23/2009 05:36:50 PM |
Nice perspective and scene. |
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