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06/27/2004 10:44:00 PM |
| Title is not like a headline and the horizon is not level. Good news-journalist type photo, though. |
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06/25/2004 12:25:37 AM |
| a strong graduated neutral density filter would help this one a lot !! |
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06/24/2004 11:15:51 PM |
| Cool idea, its is a little over exposed. |
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06/23/2004 06:51:19 PM |
This goes in order of what I notice first:
1) Title needs to have a bit of closure, no dropping off a thought for a newspaper article. What does the title have to do with the photo? I know it's of factories and oil stuff, but closing out the title will tell me what I need to see in the picture.
2) The picture needs a focus point. Crop.
Score: 4 |
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06/23/2004 05:20:27 PM |
| Looks a tad bit overexposed. Also could've saturated it a bit to bring out more of the blue in the sky. |
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06/23/2004 01:09:41 PM |
Your title is not a headline and is open to various interpretations so the photojournalistic aspect isn't there. Headlines aren't subtle--they should slap you in the face with message. Without a more revealing headline, this photo is an urban landscape.
It's kind of bleak, which is okay, but it should also impact the viewer through lighting, POV, composition. This is just rather dull and busy. Try a different time of day when the lighting is more dramatic, perhaps. The focus looks a bit off and there is a distracting bit of blur in the lower left corner. |
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06/23/2004 11:15:47 AM |
| The flar is really harmful to this image |
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06/23/2004 06:05:48 AM |
| The top left part of the image is blown out and is distarcting |
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06/23/2004 05:01:19 AM |
| Not a headline, but a great photo anyway. |
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06/23/2004 01:05:49 AM |
| This image should make us think. |
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