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01/29/2010 07:57:45 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club ;)
Artistic Merit
Pros:
* The framing is balanced.
* The lines converge to a point of interest.
Cons:
* There isn't a real compeling feature in the photo, something to catch the viewer's interest for too long.
Technical Merit
Pros:
* The photo is well exposed.
* Lighting on the subject is well controlled, with no reflexes or unlit areas.
Cons:
* There isn't enough DOF to cover the whole subject. A smaller aperture would have worked better.
* WB looks a bit on the bluish side.
* There are some distracting dust specks.
* There is some harsh lighting on the base of the photo and it is distracting.
Emotional Merit
Pros:
* This isn't something you see everyday...
Cons:
* ...but the element is too dettached from it's environment for us to connect the subject to the story from the title.
Result
I guess this picture was let down mostly by the technical aspects and the limited interest raised by the subject. This was a tough challenge with strong competition so your placement in the bottom half of the pack looks adequate.
Keep them coming!
Message edited by author 2010-01-30 03:51:37. |
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01/12/2010 05:45:55 PM |
| LOL..no cell phones were hurt in the making of this pic |
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01/12/2010 12:49:02 PM |
| Nope, this isn't going to work anymore. You stepped on it on purpose, didn't you LOL |
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01/12/2010 12:47:44 AM |
| Telemarketers? That will teach em. 7 |
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