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06/28/2004 04:22:21 PM |
I do like the picture because I am from Montreal . . . but I would have liked to see the flame.
The camera is distracting despite the fact That I like the camera (SAME as mine) |
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06/28/2004 04:11:04 PM |
| You've captured the emotion here quite well, but you've cropped/cut out the bit that makes your headline, the flame that I assume is at the top of the alloy tube... The camera is a litle distracting as well. |
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06/26/2004 08:28:04 PM |
| I would have cropped out camera. |
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06/26/2004 02:57:42 PM |
| Lucky guy. This would of scored higher if we could of seen the torch. Sorry, but the crop or composition is weak. Good luck in the challenge. |
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06/25/2004 12:10:01 AM |
| I think this would be much stronger if it showed the actual flame. |
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06/23/2004 03:00:23 PM |
| Not the best capture of an expression! And you cropped out the critical part of the olympic flame! A higher shot including the flame would have been much more dramatic, and possibly a narrower depth of field - the background is distracting. (Depth of field is controlled through apeture - try a larger apeture like f2 or f4 next time - and let the camera adjust the shutter speed accordingly. most cameras let you do this in AV (apeture priority) mode). |
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06/23/2004 02:53:52 PM |
| This photo doesn't support the headline (which BTW, should read '...Begins...'not '...Starts...'). Where's the torch? Is it that thing in front of the guy? Is he carrying it or is he just an onlooker? Why is that camera in the shot? This phot is more about this guy's reaction to something then anything else. It is too personal for the story it is meant to support. |
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06/23/2004 11:28:49 AM |
| For this header you need to see the flame!! |
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06/23/2004 09:44:18 AM |
| And when might the dentist be visiting? The guy's teeth and the camera at the bottom edge detract from an otherwise good shot. |
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06/23/2004 08:50:44 AM |
| I think the photo editor for this story would have preferred to see the actual olympic flame rather than a camera. |
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06/23/2004 06:42:01 AM |
| Hmm, for a newspaper, there's too much focus on the person. For your head title, there should atleast a picture of the flame. Ligting is a bit dull also. Maybe if you used a fill flash you would get a much better photo. |
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06/23/2004 04:31:39 AM |
| Too tight of crop, where's that flaming torch?? Other than that good job on the challenge. |
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06/23/2004 01:56:48 AM |
| Would have been nice to see the flame and no camera. |
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