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02/03/2010 11:52:09 AM |
Hi Duarte, greetings from our Critique Club :-D
I can't believe that I got yours in the draw.
Well, I'll try to give it my best :)
Composition
It doesn't seem like it was shot from inside a car, you can notice any glass, any structure from inside, it really feels like your outside the car, so great perspective here. Good balance between road and sky, there's always a tendency to put too much road on these shots, and this one's very well done.
Lighting
This is were some people have mentioned, that the scene is a bit dark. Although it was night, probably a slower shutter speed would have got you longer trails and a bit brighter image. However, it would also mean that it wouldn't be so straight (damn these Portuguese streets, full of holes and bumps).
Processing
It's a shame that this was basic editing, because a careful dodging could have highlighted some points in the picture. It has a good processing, and you managed to retain a lot of details and colours. Just a little of fill light could have done the trick.
Overall
It should have placed a little higher, but maybe with longer trails it would have more impact.
Let's see some more photos!!
Um abraço!
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02/03/2010 04:10:44 AM |
This deserved better! I've never met Mr Hello (Goodbye) before, but I'll be sure to keep an eye open for him on Saturdays around Saldanha.
Abraço. |
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02/02/2010 05:39:44 AM |
If the street was lit a bit more it would have fetched more marks |
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01/30/2010 03:35:59 PM |
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01/29/2010 10:04:46 PM |
I like the sense of motion this shot gives. I think this would be better at twilight though, as some of the buildings are lost into the sky. |
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01/29/2010 12:57:47 PM |
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01/29/2010 11:04:03 AM |
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01/28/2010 01:04:31 PM |
Can't really distinguish much here, use a tripod or part of a car for a brace. |
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01/28/2010 10:19:33 AM |
Really shows the speed at which the car is being driven. Good example of a miz of stationary and moving subjects and a moving camera ! |
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01/28/2010 04:50:26 AM |
It's a little dark, but the leading lines are nice and clean and interest is increased by the longer exposure. Para onde é que ias? :-) |
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01/27/2010 04:56:18 PM |
Interesting mix of lights and blur |
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01/27/2010 03:39:42 PM |
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01/27/2010 05:47:06 AM |
Duarte? :)
Como conseguiste que ficasse tão direita? E eras tu a conduzir?
Temos de fazer um anúncio "Don't shoot and drive" :) |
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