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02/09/2010 11:20:36 PM |
GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
My goodness you get around this country of ours. San Francisco for our famous bridge, and now a ship in Texas... What a pretty model you found for this interesting portrait. Nice processing on her face and she posed very well for you.
My first impression of this portrait (as a Critique Club member) was "what is that brown out-of-focus thing on the left?" It took a moment to get to the main attraction - your model. To make this a really successful image, you might think about de-emphasizing the ship's wheel to focus on what is, I think, your main subject.
It is good to see your work again, and I look forward to more images from you.
I hope this brief critique was helpful to you.
Alice
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02/04/2010 11:53:09 PM |
| man she is sooooo skinny...and crazy as that sounds her body position just emphasizes that. I will say that she has very beautiful eyes... |
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02/03/2010 09:48:16 PM |
| like this shot but the eyes seem WAY over processed. |
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02/02/2010 05:13:46 AM |
| Attractive model - good focus, color, lighting. Blurry handle of the wheel is quite distracting. Less wheel! More model! |
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02/01/2010 06:49:17 AM |
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