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06/29/2004 10:38:58 AM |
| Shadow from the fash is a little harsh |
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06/25/2004 04:42:47 PM |
| Low quality high school cafeteria type portrait snap.weak choce for newspaper headline,where the flash shdow is very distractibg.5 |
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06/25/2004 12:37:27 AM |
| Believable and an attractive model. Lighting done well with non-obtrusive shadows. |
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06/24/2004 06:37:00 PM |
| She is a good model! The flash you have used has caused a harsh shadow on the wall behind her and flattened out her skin tones. I would have either bounced the flash of something reflective, or taken this photo closer to a window or somewhere where there is more available light. |
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06/23/2004 07:05:44 PM |
This goes in order of what I notice first:
1) Festival? What festival? I see a girl infront of a wall. Give me an interesting background, if it's a festival shouldn't there be other people there? I don't need to see any details, but lights or something as a backdrop, not concrete.
2) Cute idea, but because of the background it looks like you did this at home, well and the fact that she has a china plate instead of a paper one...
3) The flash lit her up great, but the shadows are too harsh. Good color though.
Score: 5 |
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06/23/2004 07:28:51 AM |
| Hmm. That shadow is distracting. Background looks unpleasent also. |
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06/23/2004 05:41:33 AM |
| Pretty good photo, (hair over eye is distracting) Would like to see a crowd though for a county festival. Nice job with what you had. |
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06/23/2004 02:26:33 AM |
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