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02/16/2010 12:35:31 AM |
Hello! You have requested a comment from the critique club:
First Impression/Opinion: there seems to be a lot to take in here all at once, my eyes aren't really sure where to look first! this could have been improved by totally avoiding the clutter in the lower left hand corner & taking the shot of the main chair/couch from a different angle. i love the texture you captured on the back wall and ceiling...FANTASTIC! I would have liked to see this in color as well, the black and white feels a little bland to me...
Composition: i'm not a fan of the main subject in the direct center of an image, like i said above, you could have taken this from a different angle to give it some more interest without the clutter in the lower corner...
Post Processing: personally i would have liked this sharper and in color.
Challenge Criteria: as commenters stated below, is a couch a chair? hmm i don't know if it completely fits the challenge. I did not vote, but would have given a 5.
good luck on your future challenges!
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02/14/2010 09:15:18 PM |
| I like the softness of this -- it almost glows. |
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02/09/2010 03:50:01 AM |
| I see a sofa but no chairs. :( |
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02/08/2010 04:31:30 PM |
| I see a couch (not a chair). |
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02/08/2010 02:49:16 PM |
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