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Challenge: Shoes II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D700
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-200mm f/2.8 VR DG IF-ED
Location: Entabeni
Date: Feb 19, 2010
Aperture: 16
ISO: 500
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Fashion, Snapshot
Date Uploaded: Feb 21, 2010

Taken in morning. Only basic editing was done. Only natural light was used.

Statistics
Place: 118 out of 138
Avg (all users): 4.7622
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.6164
Avg (non-participants): 4.8791
Views since voting: 664
Views during voting: 278
Votes: 164
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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03/01/2010 03:27:32 PM
Greetings, from the Critique Club!

First thing that jumps out to me is how well this image looks technically.

Lighting, contrast, tones, clarity... all look great. Framing/PoV is different and interesting, although the composition choice may be slightly too centered. The chopped off feet from the back are also a bit odd looking, but are sufficiently out of the way, so to speak.

Unfortunately, I don't have a whole lot more to say about this image, but I think therein lies the issue. This is a great image in most 'categories' of analysis, except for that all-important characteristic of being 'interesting'.

I hope I don't sound offensive or patronizing, but when it comes down to it, this is sort of just a well done photo of a man's legs, and it just isn't all that compelling. The biggest thing I had to learn about photography is to give the viewer a reason to look at my photograph. Tell them a story, show them something different, keep them interested in the frame. I can only look at these man's legs and this cart for so long, and I'm afraid the viewers felt the same way, giving you a majority of average marks.

Looking through your portfolio, I see a level of technical skill that makes me envious. You'll notice that when you combine that with compelling subject matter, as you have in your marvelous top scoring entries, it makes for a great photo.

Thank you and Good luck!

-Adam
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/28/2010 02:57:44 PM
I see you've gone green.
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02/23/2010 08:35:11 PM
the buggy s fighting for centre of attention and the hot is about that
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