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Life is colourful - Express yourself (CW)
Life is colourful - Express yourself (CW)
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Challenge: Product Shot II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D2X
Lens: Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DL Macro for Nikon
Location: Home
Date: Mar 20, 2010
Aperture: 16
ISO: 100
Shutter: 2'
Galleries: Studio, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Mar 20, 2010

Not much modified on this photograph:
In Camera5Raw:
- Temperature
- Tint
- Blacks
In PS:
- Crop
- Adjusted levels
- Unsharpen Mask after Resizing

Statistics
Place: 77 out of 124
Avg (all users): 5.1471
Avg (commenters): 5.4286
Avg (participants): 4.8085
Avg (non-participants): 5.3258
Views since voting: 754
Views during voting: 265
Votes: 136
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/28/2010 04:14:07 PM
I like the colors, its the makeup brush I'm having an issue with. It comes across dull, maybe next time try to shine a little light on the handle.
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03/26/2010 11:55:48 AM
Shot just don't do it for me. The background is distracting and products should look new so the dust and stuff on the makeup thing (I am a guy so don't know what it is called) is very distracting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/26/2010 08:31:35 AM
Could use some sharpness
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03/24/2010 07:04:52 PM
Honestly for me this is cropped, or shot, far too tight for the subject matter. I like the idea and the use of colors but for me the composition isn't compelling, it doesn't draw me in at all and as I said it just seems too tight. 5 from me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/24/2010 06:38:21 PM
Seems slightly OOF.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/24/2010 01:42:49 PM
As you've effectively asked for comments (is it working?) here's mine.

I'm not voting because I'm in this challenge, but I think I would have given you a 6. I like the "quality" of the image - i.e. it's in focus and exposed well, and more importantly I like the composition with the strong diagonals. As a "product" shot I'm not so sure about it. I feel that all the fragments make it look very messy so I don't think it sends the right message because of that.

Hope this is the sort of comment you're looking for.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/22/2010 04:53:11 PM
I really like this. Area of improvement that I see is to make sure your pink doesn't have the crumbs of the purple in it (as on the left side of the photo. I would have gently blown out that side. I really like the composition. It sits at an interesting angle. Good job!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/22/2010 12:12:37 PM
This looks like a murder scene. I wonder who started the fight? I hope she's ok though.
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03/22/2010 05:53:44 AM
well composed, like the color combination . had cleaned the edge of the case, though
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