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Graffiti Girl
Graffiti Girl
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Challenge: Free Study 2010-03 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-7D
Lens: Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM
Location: Abandoned barn
Date: Mar 6, 2010
Aperture: f/1.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Mar 29, 2010

580ex from behind her hair, another from 45 deg right fired with an st-e2

This is Nina, we got together for a tf shoot as she wanted some shots for her profile on model mayhem, purestorm, net-model ect and so did I. I also used a shot of her in the shadows challenge which earned me my second worst score ever!!



Convert from raw upping blacks, exposure and clarity. A little dodge and burn, curves, levels, resize, noise ninja and sfw

Statistics
Place: 115 out of 350
Avg (all users): 5.8851
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
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Views since voting: 667
Views during voting: 248
Votes: 148
Comments: 9
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04/13/2010 05:13:54 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Great picture, congrats ( Graffiti Girl )!

Some ideas you may like:

1 = There is no direct link ( girl + grafitti ). She would look to the grafitti!
2 = Insert a border there!

Hope you like the ideas!

Tell me what you think about my ideas.

Regards,

Oscar Burd
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/07/2010 02:00:54 PM
Woah. She looks really tired and hasn't slept in days.
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04/06/2010 07:49:11 PM
Great shot. Vibrant colors and nice composition.
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04/06/2010 07:57:03 AM
Funny how the blown out face works with all the bright colours here. This is good. Not my type of photography but it certainly works.
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04/06/2010 06:57:08 AM
if the title implies, she's the one doing the graffti I think it would of been nice touch to have her clothes, hands, etc... have paint on them, if that wasn't your intention, then never mind
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04/02/2010 07:45:56 PM
perfect DOF and focus. contrast and colors ware very attractive
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04/02/2010 12:40:33 PM
hehee,,, dont believe she is the artist!! ,,,, no painting on her clothes an left fingers,,, i like,,,,, 6
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04/01/2010 10:36:13 PM
good shot at a nice location. I would have tried to have the back light a little bit more behind your models head then where it is placed here.
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04/01/2010 09:08:56 PM
I like this one quite a lot, except maybe a tighter crop (removing the graffiti on the left that's not in focus would have helped...since it distracts me from the subject). Also, that flash behind her head needs more diffusing. 6
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