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04/13/2010 09:38:02 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Welcome to DPC, chris_sanan! You scored exceptionally well for you first entry and I congratulate you on it.
Normally, I would suggest that since you scored so very well, you don't really need any comments from the likes of me = or any member of the Critique Club - but I'll make an exception this time.
this very fine image caught my attention right away by the red/white cloth in front of the model's beautifully modeled face. Does the red/white symbolize blood or anguish? Or?
So: Minor detail, perhaps just a touch more information in the title would help those of us who need just a bit of help in 'seeing.'
Other than that? well, again, congratulations on a fine image. Keep 'em coming.
Alice |
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04/07/2010 11:03:39 PM |
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04/07/2010 07:23:02 PM |
Not really fond of the scarf in front of her face - she has such beautiful eyes it just seems to distract from them - thank you for sharing. |
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04/07/2010 07:43:25 AM |
Great eyes. Great skin. Interesting composition. |
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04/06/2010 09:14:40 AM |
Traditional comp for a portrait is good. Lighting is very good. Eyes are oversharpened. Juries still out on the hand in front of the face...doesn't quite feel right. Just some observations. Good luck in the challenge. |
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04/06/2010 06:50:55 AM |
Beautifull image. The o.o.f. hand and cloth a little to much for me but the black on right works and the eyes are just captivating |
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04/05/2010 11:43:26 PM |
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04/04/2010 01:57:05 PM |
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04/04/2010 12:24:10 PM |
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04/02/2010 06:51:59 AM |
good clarity not sure about the negative space but still a striking photo though |
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04/01/2010 05:25:49 AM |
For me she is a bit too plastic & with oversharped eyes. She has good focus I like the composition, the three catchlights in her eyes are distracting thou |
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