Greetings from the Critique Club!
Composition:
This is an interesting photo, there is a lot going on. It looks like a very comfortable bedroom. However, there is no main subject, I think that would've helped your shot. I guess the mask could be considered the main subject, but it's definately not clearly defined.
Lighting:
The window light you used is very soft. I like it. Only exception is the glare on the artwork. The reflection is kind of distracting. A polarizer would fix that even though it's indoors.
Technical:
Not much to say here, it's technically sound.
Post-processing:
While lots of things are purple due to your editing, I don't think that's what the challenge was going for. The challenges are challenges because they are challenging ;) They make you go out and photograph something you wouldn't normally shoot. While the photo looks good, it's not naturally purple. I think if you had gone out and photographed something that was genuinely purple, your score would've been better. This is just my opinion however.
Overall:
Not a bad submission, but not ribbon material either. I'd like to see you going out and really trying to photograph something that genuinely captures the theme. I think you'll enjoy the challenges more, as well as taking better photo's. |
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