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04/21/2010 11:45:51 AM |
| This is a great image, and I would have scored it a 6. It's a tad underexposed and would really have benefitted from tweaking the highlights in post. The setup is perfect, the composition great. I understand the "dark blob" to be the bed. Your focal point is right on, and the disappearing depth of field is great. Your choice of black and white is inspired. I don't like the fact that you've forced the story on us with the title, and I would have been more restrained with that. Capturing all of the lingerie in the frame would have been best (not cutting it off at right). Again, fixing the dull and underexposed nature of the photo in post work would have really made the impact greater. Great photo otherwise. |
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04/21/2010 11:44:40 AM |
Responding to your forum thread for comments: I found the concept to be fairly creative and the shallow dof a plus to the composition. Where this image earned a 5 from me was that it lacks contrast. I'm not sure how you converted the image to b&w but there is a good tutorial here DPC B&W Tutorial.
Tim |
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04/19/2010 02:31:28 PM |
| What is that giant drak blob on the right? |
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04/19/2010 04:01:51 AM |
i like your pov in this
and B&W works great 7 |
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04/19/2010 03:28:44 AM |
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04/16/2010 08:19:05 PM |
| Very simple, nicely photographed, not the typical porn style shot. Very tasteful and nice message. Like the B&W to it. Tells a story. :) 9 |
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04/15/2010 09:05:26 AM |
| A nice idea, with a great depth of field. |
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04/14/2010 07:36:30 PM |
| Geef hier uw commentaar, en vervolgens uw stem uit ... |
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04/14/2010 05:41:26 PM |
| Each marriage can use some spicing up from time to time, even after 20 years :-) I like the DOF, the b&w gives it something extra. To me this one enters in the row with the "good and tasteful photographs" |
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04/14/2010 01:59:39 PM |
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04/14/2010 01:51:05 PM |
| I think it needs more contrast, more "pop" to the B&W. |
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04/14/2010 11:18:55 AM |
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04/14/2010 07:40:16 AM |
| Well done shot and title. |
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04/14/2010 03:21:36 AM |
| hehehe good one !! ,,,, true who need them,,,,,,but would like to see another background ,,,not wood flor,,,,,, |
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