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07/07/2004 11:09:54 PM |
| Refreshingly original. Great opportunity, but the "muzzleloader moustache" on the right ruins it for me. |
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07/07/2004 05:29:28 PM |
| I really like this, it's a nice story, verry well captured in tehnical terms, sharpness colors and everything, but compositionaly I think it could be better. I feel the crop is a bit too tight, I'd like to see the entire weapon of the girl on the right and also I'd like to see the one in the left not so close to the edge, somewhere in the 3'ds area. Anyways it's a beautiful picture. |
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07/06/2004 10:10:10 PM |
| Too bad about the musket across the face. Would have been nice. |
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07/04/2004 11:08:42 AM |
| Love this idea, just a shame that the musket is covering the other child's face. |
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07/03/2004 05:23:15 AM |
| The two things that detract from this image are the rifle entering from stage left without an owner and the rifle that seems to slapping the girl in the face. Perhaps the young defender on the left could be aiming the rifle in a classic pose (butt to shoulder) and you could safely lose the rifle entering from the left. |
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07/02/2004 02:06:37 PM |
| The gun in the middle is covering the girl's face, I think it would have looked better with the gun pointed another way... |
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07/01/2004 09:26:52 PM |
| Would have been nice to find an angle that didn't obscure the girl's face. |
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07/01/2004 07:37:32 PM |
the gun over the girls face is a bit distracting
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07/01/2004 01:09:30 PM |
| Gun is in front of girl's face. |
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07/01/2004 12:05:45 PM |
| The gun across her face spoils it for me, would want to see her expression. |
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07/01/2004 07:54:29 AM |
| Wish I could also see the second face without the gun in front of it - might consider cropping her out for impact. |
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07/01/2004 12:52:40 AM |
| I wish the gun wasnt for her face nice shot though gives the mood of old days :) |
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