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The River Walk
The River Walk
picklenose


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Black and White Landscape (Basic Editing*)
Camera: Canon EOS-50D
Lens: Canon EF 17-40mm f/4.0L USM
Location: Chattanooga, TN River Walk
Date: Apr 24, 2010
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Landscape, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Apr 24, 2010

I found this spot on the riverwalk in Chattanooga. The riverwalk is such a great feature of Chattanooga and I tried to portray that.

Adjusted the contrast
desaturated
a little sharpening.
sized
submitted

Statistics
Place: 227 out of 382
Avg (all users): 5.3421
Avg (commenters): 4.3333
Avg (participants): 5.2574
Avg (non-participants): 5.5098
Views since voting: 619
Views during voting: 242
Votes: 152
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
05/09/2010 11:57:21 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

I like the composition of this very much. The lovely footpath leads you through the image very nicely.

As several others have noted, the image feels rather soft. I'm not sure why, if it's due to a little bit of camera shake or .. For some subjects I think it's fine to be soft, but this really does need to be sharp.

As far as exposure goes, it's a bit challenging because it's obviously a rather high contrast scene to start with. It makes it difficult to get detail in the shadowy parts without blowing out the highlights to much. I don't know what editing software you use, but in PS you can open a JPEG image in Camera Raw. The slider named fill light can work well to bring back details in the darker areas. I find I use that often to help shots that are a little underexposed.

I do not precisely know why this did not score higher, I think the composition is lovely. Sorry if I did not help much.

Sarah


Message edited by author 2010-05-10 00:33:36.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/01/2010 04:18:05 PM
Good S curve takes the eye through the image well (No vote, just commenting.)
04/27/2010 10:29:32 AM
for me your focus is to soft in this
04/26/2010 05:32:31 PM
The path helps lead the eye through this shot and the B&W tones look good
04/26/2010 02:56:12 AM
like this one, love pic like this,,,,,,,, but where is the focus spot ?


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