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05/16/2010 12:13:35 AM |
Cool door handles! It is definately unique but the soda or bar behind the glass door on the left is distracting attention away from those pizza slices...wonder how this would look shot at a different angle. This will definitely take the slice (yeah bad pun I know:-) ) with uniqueness but it just needs something.
Oh you are going to kick me for this, but this might also be a good one for a reshoot (and to add something a littttlle different that some might welcome after looking at tons of door handles and locks and such). Close-up like you see here of the pizza door handles but just pull back slightly. Move two steps to the left to get most of that bar out of the picture. Now to introduce the next element: A person's hand just touching/cupping the left handle (don't have it obscured - just so much that the fingers are going to be in the action of pulling it open) Now the person's right hand will be holding a BEER! This is why I mentioned pulling back that full beer bottle needs to be fully visible and positioned just off to the right off the right pizza door handle (I has to not obsure that either). The idea is Beer and Pizza (two tastes that go well together LOL) The drawbacks to this is that whomever you get to be the model might have to contort in such a way that will be uncomfortable, this being a public place you could get some stares and a nasty stare down by the owner and you might have to zoom out so much that those great pizza handles no longer dominate the composition. Food for thought. |
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05/15/2010 11:10:50 AM |
| Yep...unique. As stated below, may be a different crop. May be a portrait crop? |
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05/15/2010 12:42:48 AM |
| This is fun. The crop seems a little close for the perspective. Don't know what you have in the original image - but leaving a bit more space around this might be good. Love the red of the door with the silver of the pizza slices. Awesomely unique. |
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05/14/2010 09:04:48 PM |
| I like the uniqueness of this one...you've got some good shots here Kari |
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05/14/2010 09:02:24 PM |
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