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12/04/2002 01:10:00 AM |
Critique Club
COMPOSITION -CONTENT - I find this too centralised and I think taking it at an angle with the lens pointing upwards would have given a more dramatic effect The overall image could have been slightly brighter and crisper
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YOUR OPINION ON THE PHOTO - although I am not an american I can relate to this scene and the sense of desolation the figure and flowers portray definitely a good shot at photo journalism
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12/01/2002 06:23:00 AM |
| I like the tones although it seems as if it could be just a bit brighter..DPz |
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12/01/2002 06:00:00 AM |
| A very atmospheric shot, tells a story on it's own. Well done. |
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11/30/2002 05:06:00 PM |
| Title and shot do not really gel here. Better title could be found. The shot screams about remembrance... not rebuild. |
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11/30/2002 03:42:00 PM |
| Nicely done. A bit dark, but a well-thought-out image. It draws the viewer in and inspires a wide range of emotion. Well done. muckpond |
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11/28/2002 09:13:00 PM |
| Timely news article. Good composition, execution needs some things. Photo needs lightened up some - so we can see the things hanging on the fence and their colors. Also need to see the man better. This is where your emotion is for this picture. Lightening the shot would have enhanced the emotion. Or that's my opinion. But women like the emotion of things. Otherwise good job. PTL8 |
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11/28/2002 03:59:00 AM |
| Nice shot, given recent events I could certainly see this on the front page. The person in the photo is a nice touch, it wouldn't have been the same without them there. |
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11/27/2002 09:44:00 PM |
good to see that the flowers haven't stopped arriving.
"oh beautiful for patriot dream that sees beyond the years,
thine alabaster cities gleam undimmed by human tears." |
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11/27/2002 12:33:00 PM |
| I think I would have dropped the camera a little lower and angled it upward to show the empty sky. 7 nards656 |
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11/26/2002 08:42:00 PM |
| Great impact and composition. |
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11/26/2002 09:53:00 AM |
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11/26/2002 03:50:00 AM |
| Was there any way to get closer??? |
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11/25/2002 10:51:00 PM |
ahh yes finally someone meeting the "impact of the moment stated in the challenge".. the guy hanging on to the fence makes him seem to be pining away for someone that's not coming back....
~anachronite |
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11/25/2002 09:59:00 PM |
| A bit too dark for me.... |
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11/25/2002 06:07:00 PM |
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11/25/2002 03:27:00 PM |
| Pretty dark shot, but I get the idea. Justine |
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11/25/2002 08:48:00 AM |
| drop a point for being a little too underexposed, still leaves you with a 7 |
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11/25/2002 06:26:00 AM |
| I worked on that project all last winter. I remember these buildings well. cool shot. love it |
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11/25/2002 02:07:00 AM |
| Good content, but needs better emotional feel, wait until the guys turns around and you can see his expression |
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